I am a flower
I can be fragile
but I show no weakness.
Like a flower I stand tall and proud
with my head held high.
The bright colors brighten up people's day.
Each petal represents the different layers of my life.
From good to bad,
Each petal is something special to me.
A flower's aura represents my personality.
Sweet, beautiful
and just overall, lovely.
i like that your metaphor is comparing you to a flower, but the way you compare some of your characteristic dosent make sence. for example how does each petal represent different layers of your life?
ReplyDeleteIt's nice to see you compare yourself to a flower but not all flowers are the same. Try to focus more on your you are unique an that there is no other flower like you out there. Although overall this was a very nice poem. (:
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